this is has some lovely lines in it and there is some lovely movement in Diana however I feel the movement gets lost in the darkness of the background.

Great job so far!

Great black and white shot. I like the motion and symmetry of the two figures.

Hi Ella: I love this shot, you captured the motion and great expressions of the dancers. I do agree with Yvonne that Diana is lost from the dark background. Try playing with the mid tone in curves to see if you can alter it. Or in photoshop in channel mixer you can adjust each colour separately for black and white. Overall I love your composition and capturing diana in motion.

cheers