I have been skirting around this image for a day now, but now I will tell you what I really think.

The pose looks uncomfortable and very unsexy, (the legs) the blur adds nothing to the shot, the background does not work either,

What you could have done was actually set your shutter speed much faster and to continuous capture and get snapping, cause she will obviously be moving fast andthere are many different poses that can be captured that way. You do need to pay more attention to the background in your captures REALLY.

Suby

suby - i totally disagree. i think the blur adds a feeling of surreal movement in the grass. and i like the water on the concrete that frames the green. textural.

this shot reminds me of the quote
"we are all leaves on the same tree"

I find it intriguing and the blurred texural imagery draws me in.